by +Fouillis+ Sep 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
No longer will she feel the pain, the heartache in her chest, |
This is good. i like it |
This reminds me of me and in saying that, this is such a deep poem. So much pain, so few words. And I understand exactley |
Wow, you're an awesome writer. this is so heartfelt. I love your rhyme scheme and your word choice. keep it up, it'll get you far! |
Sad.. but i enjoyed it ^_^ |
Its really good you really have some talent.keep up the good work! |