An interesting read, my biggest problem here was it was a bit cliché and the idea is sort of very over done. Your rhymes weren't quite as well done this time however there is something that I quite liked in this poem but I'm not sure what, a good job! 4/5.
luv kt

Hey this is really good i like it alot great job 5/5. thanks for the comment.
*Freakfall15*

Wow omg i luv this one!
its soo good
omg
im ike in shock here
woo!
its awsum!
yay!
go claire!
luv amy

Wow amazing. you are a really good writer thanx for the comment on my poem. ive been saved but i was just going through a dark time.. keep writing, god gave you a gift! comment some of my old poetry when ya getz a chance! bye bye god bless