Comments : You give you give, Give me your life!

  • 19 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    Wow......im speechless...wow! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Jaime

    Josh, has anyone told you lately that you are an amazing writer? Wow. I read not only this one, but a few other poems of yours, and your use of repetition adds a nice flow. Congrats~

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey dalr i really liked this p0em very t0uching and inspiring. very well written. a t0uching piece. keep it up thank u heaps f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me

    l0ve always d0ra