by Unrequited Sep 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Ripped across my veins |
Oh...so sad so beautiful .. .:'( |
by ASPHYXIATED
Very well written, I love your word usage! it was well put together..and it didnt flow but was easy to read. |
Very different not your usual stanza step up. Good job. |
Ooh...darkness...love....interesting again....I love it minus the mention of blood and cut...but yeah...not too graphic :) |
by EpithetPoet
Reminds me of a book i just read actually. if i told you the story though it'd sound insanely stupid... very nice song... |