Reminds me of a book i just read actually. if i told you the story though it'd sound insanely stupid... very nice song...
-A

Ooh...darkness...love....interesting again....I love it minus the mention of blood and cut...but yeah...not too graphic :)

*still admires your talent*

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Very different not your usual stanza step up. Good job.

Very well written, I love your word usage! it was well put together..and it didnt flow but was easy to read.
A well enjoyed read! keep it up x)

Oh...so sad so beautiful .. .:'(