Amazing flow and power throughout the poem. Strong ideas, good meter, good style, simply a brilliant poem.

Be careful however with words using apostrophes because this website cant handle it unless you retype them in here, because your word don't has turned into "donâ??t". Also i think you meant "my fingers" not "me fingers" in the 7th line.

This is an incredible piece; I wish you could bookmark poems from your favourite authors- because this would be there. Brilliant work!