Wow! i loved it. i was just thinkin today about writing a poem about 9/11. youve just inspired me too do that. your poem was awesome. the flow was excellent and it was very meaningful 5/5

A very unique layout for this poem, and it pays off. perfect timing for this, in the current wake of devastation, this time of year is just full of tragedy. well anyways, good write

Thank you all so much I appreciate every commet all you lovely people leave me!

Nada, so sorry to make you cry my friend! I am so scared to girl....Every time I'm at a big event or watching a big event I get nervous! I respect your muslim and hope to make you most comfortable for you are human too! Thank you for commenting I didn't mean to make you cry!

A very heartfelt piece that should be published in every state across America . I live in Canada and would be also proud to live in any of your states . The people of U.S.A are people the bind together in a crisis and still come out in the end walking tall . You have a big heart girl and an ability to express your words through poetry .Don't ever let anyone break that strength and ability . A definate 5 in deserved .

Awww thank you so much..that just made my whole day..I really needed to hear that! THank you so much hat comment meant a whole lot!

Wow, that was really touching. I can still remember that day. I was at school and my History Teacher was watching it on tv when we came into the room. She was in tears. We asked her what was wrong. She didn't say anything. She just pointed to the tv. It was very very heart breaking. That was a very very good poem of yours. great good. I really like it

Hey Princess!

What a great patriotic piece this one turneed out to be - Im so proud and so honoured to have helped you babes, it was a pleasure. I loved this piece as soon as I started reading it, I found it a beautiful dedication written with heartfelt honesty, sorrow and love. Very special and appreciated babes at the perfect time 4 years on.

Eirisa

Thank you for making us all remember that this month makrs a tragedy. so many are too busy and forget.

Yes we should all remember and never forget...I know I still remember and will never forget. amazing and meaningful write! keep up the good work.

Thats amazing..:)
we all owe it to u big time for being so sensitive about 9-11
i know you really care
so do i
great write
sarah x x x x

Beautiful job! i still remember that day quite well. my only fears is that this country with time may forget it and not learn from it and the fact that it may repeat it's self once again. i do feel sorry for the people that died in the pentagon and the plain that crashed in the field, they always seemed forgotten, it's always the twin towers remembered, it's sad. but ok loved the poem it's done beautifully!

~Jacklyn

I appreciate the comment you left on my poem about New Orleans. We both wrote about topics of death and pain, but we went about it very different ways. Where I addressed the cold from without, you addressed the warmth within. Where I was specific, you were general. And where I was pessimistic, your optimism shone through. Very nice poem.