by wendy Sep 6, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
love is
My mind says no |
Wow taht was an awesome poem! I raelly liked it and keep u pthe good work! |
This poem is tight....you know u can teach gurlz like me a lesson i just love the way you be writting...5/5.... |
by Tiny Reader
Very easy to read thanks to the flow and rhyme. Good structure. Very well written. One thing sp-Straight. Excellent though. |
by keep n touch
Such very good questions you ask here. i dont think anybody could fully answer them. very well written |
by Katie
Thats a great poem. I really like the rhyme scheme. It flows so well and has a great message. I think we all have to make that decision in our life, to fallow our hearts or to fallow or minds. It is an extremely well written poem. You have awsome talent. I think you just made my favorites. 5/5! |