Very well put and to the point take a lok at my poems sometime thanks david

I really liked that one and the abrupt end was really good. great style and flow. great job. 5/5

Wow rache i have to say that one starteld me! i expected brit to have worte that lol. Its really good i really like it! very.....sharp lol. Luv ya!!!
Kisses!!

Hi rachel. i'm a member to now. i've only written one peom so far...i need to submit the ones i've done one paper...ah well. look me up. i'm goddessofsong

I liked the emotion and the metaphor of this poem. it really felt like your feelings were an object like thats how he saw it. 5/5