When I woke up.

by Jacob M Parnell   Sep 7, 2005


When I woke up.
She was already gone.
Staring through an empty cup.
And the note it was on.
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The not read.
How she started this with doubt.
My worst dread.
Now being played out.
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A peice of my heart.
Was being torn with each line.
My entire world falling apart.
And this was the first sign.
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She wrote about true love.
What she was hoping to find.
What she didnt know of.
Was her love was blind.
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My love for her was here.
It never left the entire time.
Together for a year.
Each obsticle thought possible to climb.
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Gone with no goodbye.
No more see you tomorrow.
She left me high and dry.
Alone in a feeling of sarrow.
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Because when I woke up.
Hoping to say good morning.
I found a not under a cup.
Saying my girlfriend left with no warning.

Copyright 2005 (c) JP

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tasha

    Jake my darling, thanks for making me feel some what better about guys. :). And it makes me happy to know that you still read my poems as I do yours. 5/5.
    -Natosha B.

  • 19 years ago

    by Falling Up

    Wow this really captures the essense... and from your picture, i dont really see you being a poet either... but youve proved me wrong.. everyones got somthing theyre good at , whether or not they like to share it, and im glad youve chosen to, because it is beatiful. it has good structure, good rhyming sceme, and above all , contains true emotions

  • 19 years ago

    by Crisett

    Omg sad but when u let sum1 u love go it even harder!!...5/5 crissy

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