You written so lovely you must have truly
cared for this person.In any case this is a great poem.

Hey girl,
This is in any case a decent poem. What i find thought-provoking is this line:

"The beauty of a Sirens alluring voice."

- Hence it sounds so natural yet when i think about it, i wonder how alluring a siren is. Never-the-less i loved the line, it made the poem. Wonderful writing my friend.

- Love always and forever.
x Kalah.

Sirens are from the Odyssey, they carry beautiful voices and when they sing no one can resist but going towards them. His crew had to put bee\'s wax in their ears too not hear their singing. They tied Odysseus to the boat so he could hear them but not go to them. Their voices were very alluring bringing many men to their death.

~Jacklyn

That was lovely, a brilliant poem as your 200th, the descriptions were so elegant and wonderful, It was a pleasure to be able to read your work, my numbers appear to be on the blink, they only just told me you'd written more, well this is simply wonderful wow

"With straggly hair of brown,
with scattered Columbine Blue,
Scents enticing me to you,
the beauty of a Sirens alluring voice"

this stanza was fantastic, the sirens part especially, well done
xxxxxxxxxx

Somehow you manage to capture a thought and put it in beautiful words...truly amazing

Really like this one. :)

I like how you compare your love with an angel. that alone says so much. nicely written poem!