by Goth Sep 7, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
We all make choices, |
by Samantha
There couldnt be a more truthful poem in the world... very creative and nice job!! |
by Little Dot
This poem has a great message in it about lying and that is it just better to tell the truth in the first place. I think you expressed your opinion on it very well. Keep up the great work. |
Great poem. the ending was very good |
by Jamie
Okay so ive read three so far...and they are all SO simple...and I mean one surface poem is okay two is okay but you have to write something deeper then what it is at first sometime... |
Good poem it flowed nicely, didn't really rhyme much but still flowed well. graet job once again! |