Hey good write 4/5 I liked it alot but it was a little choppy in some parts but it wasn't like a bad choppy

~natalie

Wow.. that poem was really good too, i liked it, you have a gift for writing poetry, 5/5

I like your poem, it'r really sad and nice written, keep writing.

Wow. wow. wow. wow. wow.
that was an absolutely amazing poem!

good work, keep going.

xX

Wow
fantastic
5/5 without a doubt
keep it up

bEyOnDhElP

Woh! Couldnt have done better myself! keep up the good work! ^_^