Instead of all the fake

by The Angel of Secrets   Sep 7, 2005


Wow, just think about it,
All those tears,
It's really amazing,
All those fears.

We cry for the ones who hurt us,
We cry for the ones who doesn't care,
Why don't we cry for the ones who love us?
Why don't cry for the ones who share?

Why not wright a poem,
about all those who to us are kind?
Why not right a poem,
for those who have a positive mind?

Why don't we wright a poem,
a poem for the ones who no matter what, doesn't break,
Lets wright a poem for the real ones,
Instead of all the fake.

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  • 18 years ago

    by SHoRTy

    Dam....... you know how to express your self don't you you got a 5/5 from me holla

  • 18 years ago

    by Fredaeya

    I love it! Keep up the good work,....its reli gud 4 14. keep writing! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Wonderful Job!!! WOW such talent for a 14 year old!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Wow.
    its great...
    really makes you think. everyone writes poems about people who have hurt them about people who dont care... there arent as many poems about the people who matter, the ones who care...

    well done

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by I finally found true LOVE

    That was really good becaue u just made me notice that all i do is write poems about the people who have broken my heart and i don't acknowledge the one's who treat me with respect.

    THANKS!!!!!!!!

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