Hey.... now that was very poetic indeed, Especially the "thorns snake thier stems" Very good job 5/5

Ooh yea ... I'd like to see more of your work!

At first i was a bit inhibited, but then i was drawn in once i got the flow and read easily til the end.. those last lines were really phenomenal.. its so dense in metaphor/image/meaning.. the whole poem actually does this too, but this was a powerful closer,.. this poem seems like it's pretty much complete..

Where'd all your other poems go, and will u be posting new ones?

Wrong lenny ;P my bad,.. ne way.. good poem, and despite your profile, i would like to see more..

That was extremely deep! wow! all the metaphors and imagery is amazing! i wanna c more as well! if u have the chance, i wouldnt mind some comments on my, i need help finding a good style! ta

Really like this poem, well done, 5/5

Nice job i love your flow it was very smooth nice job keep it up 5.5

Wow, its simply amazing! It represents the whole world, and I just love the last stanza, its just so amazing, and symbolic.

I would like 2 see some more of your work 2... damn, wish i could write like that. you got real talent girl!!

Peace

Hippie
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