Wow, great flow and word usage!
The idea was great, it kept me thinking, the ending was a suprise.
I really enjoyed reading it!
Wow..im actually speechless O_O

Wow...dark!!

x)

Woah, that's awesome, I loved it, great work

Awesome! Darkness always knows our names.

Sounded like a vampire thing...but the ending keeps you guessing. loved it!