This is a sad sad poem I'm so sorry about your cuz.... Good write and keep your head up I'll always be here if you need me (misty_zena@hotmail.com) :)

This is a sad sad poem I'm so sorry about your cuz.... Good write and keep your head up I'll always be here if you need me (misty_zena@hotmail.com) :)

Wow what and amzing poem i am so sorry for what happend to you family, it's very hard to lose some one. hope you are ok. amazing poem you showed very good feeling and the flow was amaing too keep it up

Very Well Detailed, I Liked The Strong Message You Displayed, Many Yound Girls Need To Hear This Because So Many Of Them Are Miss-Guided And End Up In Danger,Anyway *Hugs And Love* 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

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Dat is so sad but i like da poem! ~*~

I am so sorry what happened to your cousin. and i just want to say, that man is going to burn in hell one day. this poem is the sadest poem, and it makes me feel selfish that i am moping around because my boyfriend left me. i swear to god that this poem made me cry.

Sad poem i cried! i gave u a 5/5 ur such a great poem writer i suck at writing keep writing i luv reading ur poems even tho sum r sad

Poor girl....by the way...nice poem too... 5/5 ^^

Wow that was really powerful! It;s making me cry cuz that happend to a girl I knew
I'm really srry :(
5/5

Thats really sad, and really well written

It was nice
you got mature skills

Thats a very good poem! im so oh very sorry about your cousin! that man should be on his death bed for that. its sick! what a bastard! well sry about your loss! and keep up the good poems! 5/5

I also hope that man rots in jail. I know sorry won't make it better but the loss of a family member is hard to deal with. Great poem.

That was awesomely written, im sorry bout ya cousin

Wow, sad and stunning. I'm sorry for your loss

WOW!!! I'm still cryin. I'm sorry about your loss. I am going to have my 13 year old sister read this because maybe then she will understan why we don't like her being out late at night. Thank you.

That's rlly sad.it should happen to no one.he should rot in jail ad hell!good poem tho

What a sad lost...I know what it feels like to lose someone close to you.You have a talent for poetry, keep it up and that man SHOULD rot in jail for what he's done.

Great poem. Powerful message behind this. A shame so many lives end so young. I am sorry for your loss.