Omg rainy....that was so beautiful...if only all the world could have someone to love...it would be like a fantasy, and that poem was amazing. Your talent and your age intregies me, its wonderful.

And if every morning I could wake up
With you next to me
I would never stop staring
For when I look I cannot breathe

thats my favorite line:) i'll read more of ur awesum poems when i have time, rite now i gtg do homework=\.

This poem reminds me of all my family and friends that I cherish. Especially, currently of a former babysitter in the hospital. Thanks again for sharing. It means a lot to me.

Good poem. Keep up the great work! I cannot thank you enough for sharing. :o)

Michelle

Definately reminds me ofsomeone. *tear*.. Good job

Wow...a beauuuutifullll poem!!! loved it!
xxx
keep it!
thanks for the entry in contest girl!

Wow!

Very beautifully written i love the thoughts it put into my head and the emotion the poem left

keep the talent keep the faith keep the ability to write beautifully

laura

I love how you ended it(:
Good choice of words and I love the emotion .

And if every morning I could wake up
With you next to me
I would never stop staring
For when I look I cannot breathe

Love those four lines ![=
Beautifully written, hon` .
..__MiNDYY