by XxTeArSxX17 Sep 8, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
TEEN CONSEQUENCES |
Oh yea it did a flow andrea! This poem is absolutely amazing. |
by Andrea
You could definitly make alot of improvments. although it was a story ir should rhyme. some parts did but..it didnt have a flow |
Wow, amazing, your poems are getting greater than I thought. Keep it up! 5!!!! ;) =) |
by patrick125
Wow ash, awesome poem. keep up the good work. You're not realy pregnant are you. |