Death comes calling (Rhyme)

by Goth   Sep 8, 2005


From this to that,
One things a fact.

From your first breath,
To your last,
It will come to pass.

Death will come calling,
Maybe in the form of falling.
It may come next week,
Or maybe in your sleep.

If you think your safe,
You better think again.
Cuz this could be,
Your end.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Once again, very true message. People should live life to the fullest because they never know when it will end.

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    I agree with drew its not necessary that everything should rhyme... but u've done a good job !!

  • 19 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    You seem too focused on rhyming and everything that it seems all other elements to your poetry is compromised.. not much imagery at all,.. there is a flow, but it seems sporadic.. i just think you would maybe benefit by writing a poem with lots of description and "color" without making it rhyme.. this one just seems flat. rhymes dont make the poem, and nor is poetry based on rhymes.. with that said, it isnt bad at all, just could be more, imo.. pZ =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    Good job once again, keep it up cuz your poems are really good!

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Amazing job keep it up.. oh about your comment i am sure we all do. and i am sure that some point in your life you will fide som one who would care for you liek i care about my ex. but the sad part is the guys that dont care are the guys that many of us fall for. dont know good like amazing poem 5.5

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