Amazing job keep it up.. oh about your comment i am sure we all do. and i am sure that some point in your life you will fide som one who would care for you liek i care about my ex. but the sad part is the guys that dont care are the guys that many of us fall for. dont know good like amazing poem 5.5

Good job once again, keep it up cuz your poems are really good!

You seem too focused on rhyming and everything that it seems all other elements to your poetry is compromised.. not much imagery at all,.. there is a flow, but it seems sporadic.. i just think you would maybe benefit by writing a poem with lots of description and "color" without making it rhyme.. this one just seems flat. rhymes dont make the poem, and nor is poetry based on rhymes.. with that said, it isnt bad at all, just could be more, imo.. pZ =)

I agree with drew its not necessary that everything should rhyme... but u've done a good job !!

Once again, very true message. People should live life to the fullest because they never know when it will end.