by Michael D Nalley Sep 8, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
When I was young my thoughts were all fresh |
by HJ
Again wonderful work, suspenseful and rich in detail. |
by lisa marie
Wow this was a really great poem. I liked it so much. You are truely a great poet. The rhyme scheme was perfect. The flow was perfect and it had a nice little repitition. Also, nice message. |