Short but I like it...the flow was good! great job...keep up the good work!

Loved it, awsome flow and you have a way of choosing your words
it was short but its still good

This poem was charming!
I really liked it.

Aww Joe,
I loved it , keep it up hun,
-Love Ash

WOW! VERY GOOD! I'm putting you on my favorite's list. I think I might want to borrow this poem sometime. If that's alright with you? :o)

Thanks again! 5/5!

Michelle

Short and sweet! But on a serious note, once again i like the message- i often feel like there isn't enough hours in the day to get everything done but i always make time for the ones i love- they keep me sane! I like how you structured it as well- i was not expecting the poem toe nd like that. Take care. XxX

But take the time to love
it's the greatest gift from above

this line is so true^^ again short but gets the message across.. loved it 5/5

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