Awww this was a beautifl dedication to the one you love!! I'm sure she loves these peices just as much as I do!! I loved the last stanza way to end the poem!! It truly was amazing and your right when you said you don't know how to write a poem without writing from the heart!!
With Love and a 5,
~Chelsey~

Wow...Bill, this is such a sweet and nice poem...I love the last few lines...very strong and powerful words! Just love it...keep up the good work and thank you for sharing your poems with us! Take care and God bless you.

That heartbeat is just for you...... that is my favorite line. I love the words you use in this write. You are both so lucky to have found each other. Beautiful Bill, simply beautiful.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela