by Bill Turner Sep 10, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
There is darkness all around |
by kassie
Dude this poem is awesome I love it keep writing and well..... ROCK ON! lol |
by Melissa
Wow, this is so so true! I love this poem so much! Excellent choice of words, fantastic write! |
by Lyn
The punchline 'only a lucky few can escape their past' really jumps out and made me reread the poem again. I escaped my past by turning to God and gaining forgiveness and freedom. You are a very good writer encapsulating deep thoughts in a concise but poetic way. |
I love this. very thought provoking..even haunting in a sense. One can relate to the fear of such a thing. there is something we all wish to escape from the past.. |
by neens
Great job. I really like that one. Keep up the great work. It really flowed well. |