Comments : Cruel Fate

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany01

    Thank u so much for commenting my poems 5/5 on urs too

  • 19 years ago

    by brittany

    Great wrk loved it. and thx so much for u comments:)

  • 19 years ago

    by *NiCoLe*

    WoW!! that is really great....thank you sooo much for the comment...it really meant alot...and yes i'm making it through one step at a time....But great poem...i luv the way you write your words....5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Lenny

    I like your writing style, though old english like it is really effective, maybe I'm just saying that because I love shakespeare but I really like it

  • 19 years ago

    by *NiCoLe*

    Great poem keep up the good work...and thanks for the comment

  • 19 years ago

    by chyenne

    I wish i was as good as you!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    I love the intensity & the determination in ur words! lovely

  • 19 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Oh my god i LOVE this! it is exactly what i've been searching for! this kind of poetry really hits me and i think this style is the best, it grips onto you, and you want to read more because of the old english touch. this really touched my heart, 5/5.
    The girl that Thou hast o'erthrown,
    Was mine, but Thou hast let her goe.
    ooo, one of the best parts, i think. great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good, Though I'm not used to your style. Keep it up, Thanks for your comment

  • 19 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Don't see many poems like this one, don't see many tributes either, it very well done,

  • 19 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Well, first of all...Thank you so much for being so supportive with all my poems...I'm really glad that someone with such a talent as you likes my dorky poems! Tambien muchas gracias por la amistad que me brindas, that's really nice/sweet. ^_^ Take care and keep it up my friend! You're a great poet.

  • Another eeally well written poem.
    I love the language, it makes it more original.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wow, wonderful poem. Very well written I love it. 5/5 Thanks for the comment on my poem, it means alot to me, that some people understand how I am feeling.

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    Very different from the ones i've read !!
    i have commented on ur other stuff before... so i'll add u as well to my favs list
    keep me posted bout ur new poems
    love
    amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    Great job im definatly not used to the wording but it sure does make you sound really really smart...which i think your are because your writing is beautiful great job 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    Very awesome. even though i dont understand half of the time i still think its good.

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    I think this poem is slightly harder to read than your others, but as you said it's a tribute to the style of another writer. And many would disagree with my comment. However, once I tried to get past this, I found another poem with a lot of work put in to make it the best it can be. Your passion comes across in your writing. You're very talented.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    Great writing!!! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Woah..this was like shakesperian (spelling?). very good! keep up the gr8 work!
    ~me~

  • 18 years ago

    by beautiful-angel

    Love you writing style and rythm you keep good pace and i never wanted that 1 to end