Doomed To Hell

by JL   Sep 10, 2005


Fade away slowly
into the misting rain
hide among the shadows
to see through the lies you strain

Slip into a world
containing only darkness and hate
no love or joy here
but you accept your fate

Glide through the air
Ignored by those alive
Relive your death again and again
Remember how no one cried

Watch your family laugh and play
Notice the new portrait as you dwell
Visit the new storage room before you go
Forever doomed to hell

*sorry it sucks I'm in a bad mood, and the person "you" committed suicide if you were wondering*

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  • 19 years ago

    by JL

    Yea thanx for your comment. i hope ppl will cry for me but im not sure if that will happen.

  • 19 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    I dont think it sucked....it was good.

    "Remember how no one cried"

    thats my favorite line...how do u know if anyone will miss u when we've died...we've cried for people, but will they cry for us...