I hated the holocaust i cried at some things i heard and saw this poem is great gj *zar'roc

*zar'roc-misery

Great job, You certianly capture a mood very well and when I read this i was moved. I remember the things i've been told about the holocaust and they echoed the things you wrote about. It all clicked and fell into place very neatly. Definately a 5/5.

A strong and powerful subject, which is difficult to write about, I know I've tried it.
What happened back then will never be forgotten or forgiven, as the tragedy was too awful. You did well to bring those points forward. I'm sure everything in your poem is truthful and so it allows others to remember the suffering that went on.

The only criticism I have is that you have made it rhyme. I understand if rhyming poetry is your style, that is fine. My only point is rhyming can create a bouncy rhythm to the poem and so taking the seriousness away.

Good job, a well written tribute.