by Justin Sep 11, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The vision brought me into light, |
It's a very beutiful poem, The words and the structure is just perfect and it rhymes. |
I can identify with this alot. you wish for something better, you feel u are doing all that u can, and then when u start to hope, something happens and smacks u right back down again. |
I really liked it. it was great keep up the great work.....huggs.....missy |
I liked that very much. It had a nice flow to it. I hope to read more of your poetry. |
by amber
I like it good job keep it up |