I like it good job keep it up

I liked that very much. It had a nice flow to it. I hope to read more of your poetry.
Good Job Lad!

-Jennifer.

I really liked it. it was great keep up the great work.....huggs.....missy

I can identify with this alot. you wish for something better, you feel u are doing all that u can, and then when u start to hope, something happens and smacks u right back down again.
excellent poem!

It's a very beutiful poem, The words and the structure is just perfect and it rhymes.