One word: WOW

"Whispers and laughter stroll just out of view
Blame falls upon me for stealing you
For it is easier to blame those whom you never liked
Hatred falls so simply upon each sugar coated lie" love those lines! this poem is sad but greatly writen! which is no surprise coming from a great poet like your self. you could write about almost any topic and make it good and i can't say that about many poets! the only thing is at the beginning you repeat "I" kind of a lot but it thined out as the poem went on. beautiful job though! sorry for the kind of short comment but i have to leave to go somewhere.

~Jacklyn