by katie! Sep 11, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Overcast weather lands upon the banks of time |
Hey i liked this it was cleverly written (if that makes sense !!) i especially liked the line 'a broken wagon lies decaying at the side of agony' i don't why but i think it's really powereful !!! |
Wow i like it. . . could really picture it. . . good use of language. |
by Jacklyn
Wonderful job. you do have better but yet this poem is still a very well done one at that. nice vocabulary as well. i see you have like 7 new poems just give me time and i will read them all. take care. |