Wonderful job. you do have better but yet this poem is still a very well done one at that. nice vocabulary as well. i see you have like 7 new poems just give me time and i will read them all. take care.

~Jacklyn again well done.

Wow i like it. . . could really picture it. . . good use of language.

read some of mine
laura
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Hey i liked this it was cleverly written (if that makes sense !!) i especially liked the line 'a broken wagon lies decaying at the side of agony' i don't why but i think it's really powereful !!!
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