Em hunny this is SUCH a beautiful poem, soo sad. i really like it. ad i like the way its all short. aww youve made me all sad now
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I gave this tiny one a five. :p lol and thank you very much for your strange compliments. :p ^_^ they made me laugh. i hope you enjoy some of my other poetry lately i havn't been that popular on this site and it's starting to piss me off. i'll maybe check out a few more of yours as well. c ya.

I know this is a while after you wrote it on here, but I have to say how much I'm liking this.. It's subtle, yet deep, short, but in-depth. Simple, yet filled with meaning. Maybe u may like to read my 'Through my window', as it encounters similar circumstance.. tho my poems are basic.. lol.. be warned..!! :-)

This one is also faboulous! it's so short, and yet creates such an impact...infact, i don't think it would work if it were any longer........anyway, what i'm trying to say is :

BRILLIANT!!!

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