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Wow dat waz really good!! keep up da goodd work!

Very good. That is happening around everywhere you go. People not paying attention to others. Then the cut themself for attention. Very sad. Good poem though.

Very Good. I know what you are feeling..and it sux. Keep up the work and write, i would like to see more of ur stuff! Anyway talk to me whenever!

Juls

Wow its .. very good ..I can feel it . its touching. .. keep it up hun !

Crystal

Aww thts sad, very good hun!
keep it up!
becca x

Great poem srtong and sad , keep up the good work hun u gotta a 5/5 from me