"I hold no promisses but plenty of regret."
`promises

"But beyond my sorrow is my hope
Which is how I cope and how
My hello is my smile"
`I loved your optimistic attitude in this piece. There's always hope, I'm glad you see beyond the sorrow and find the best in things.

Overall, the title was really good too. Pretty original and captured my attention from the very beginning. You did a great job with such a small idea. 5/5.

Very good poem. It was short and simple yet held a lot of meaning. The flow was good and the concept was decent. But the best part was your word usage, totally astonishing.

Wow so original and i really like this :)

you and the world. hehehe great theme.

5/5

Everybody has regrets and thats just the way life goes I guess....but whether you live your life perfectly or not (which I promise you won't) We all have the same result at the end anyways. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

5/5. NICE! This poem is awesome the whole way through... I liked the title and everything else. You're going on my faves!

Really lovely!!!keepit up!