Surrender

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Sep 11, 2005


Silence speaks through the darkness,
As I slip into the night's open arms.
Surrendering to the pleas in my head.
Surrendering to my consciousness.

A soft melody fills my ears,
As I dream of the days to come.
Soft laughter echoes in my head,
As I think of the happiness I once had.

Fighting the images, I drift away.
Slipping into a land of my own.
Slipping into my paradise.
Surrendering, I drift into my eternal sleep...

© Fighter

*I have no idea where this came from... weird poem... lol

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  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written as always. It has a sence of mysteriousness. Yeah. keep up the good work.. xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    It does seem kind of strange but in another way it makes complete sence xox

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Awesome poem Hunny! I love it, besides what id normal? weird things are the best things:) I love the wording and everything is just wowie:D keep up the great work

    Love Jenn x0x0x
    Ps. Do you every reply to PMs?