Wow...so far this thing has been great! its showing that noones perfect and I really loved the twists and all the emotion! I loved the whole thing it so far rocks! keep it up and tell me when its finished!!

Much love x)

I really like this poem! I like the story line..and the ryhming scheme. Great Job! 5/5

DFK

Nice job once again the story is getting better each time keep it up 5.5