Comments : Wish You Saw

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Wow. Deep write, m'love. I do hope it's not true, though. I love you so, so, so, so, so much, and I don't ever want you to be sad, or to hide from you. You're too amazing. E> I love you.

    About the poem again, though. I love your descriptions, especially in the first stanza. "A broken man with trembling flaws". E> Amazing. Pure genius. The second stanza is awesome too. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this...and I also liked how you brought up the shaking again. Okay, the third stanza, definitely my favorite. "Distorted film which his life's projected, Spit upon as one of life's rejected" E> My FAVORITE part. Absolutely outstanding. So creative. :-). Annnddd of course your ending, it's marveelouuss. Only took three tries! :-). I love it.E> You're such a fabulous writer, my prince. I hope you never stop. *Hugs tightly* Smile for me baby, I'm here for you if you ever need to talk....I love you, so much. Take care, please. xoxoxox

    Love you always,
    .xxx.Mortie.xxx.

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Correction: and I don't ever want you to be sad, or to hide from me.***

    Sorry. :-).