Very well expressed girl , it doesnt suck at all ..itz an amazing poem , really amazing actually, even though its short .. its got a lot of powerful meaning too it!!! keep up the wurk

OMG u just took the words out of my head!i totaly understand how u feel!and what ur going through!so im here if ya wanna talk!i loved every word that u wrote its such a meaning ful poem! and it doesnt such!it f u k i n roks! so keep it up!and keep shining 5/5 ..josie...