No actually you are wrong this poem isn't all that bad, infact i like it a lot with the message it sends, that no matter what they are putting you through you are willing to learn for the better of it and grow stronger and not sink down to their level. for they will try to seek your weakness for they are very weak themself, so they show someone else's instead of theirs. great poem. and great message.

~Jacklyn

Thanks, I still dont like it but I guess I cant judge my own work. Anyway Thanks for being my first comment on anyof my poems, feel free to check them out if you have time I would love to hear what you think about them.