My neverending story

by rick   Sep 12, 2005


Peaceful mind killed once again
broken again, i must mend
15 today lost and dead
every year i fear and dread
the day has come where pain hits home
no longer can my thoughts roam
fixed on one thought, the thought of demise
i love my family. its death i dispise.
the time will come when im finally better
but not now. i feel under the weather
tragedy, anger, loss and hate
ill be happy when this is over
it will be great

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  • 19 years ago

    by Casey

    I really don't understand whats going on in this poem. First I thought that maybe someone died on their fifteenth birthday, now I'm wondering if you've got an illness like cancer... I really don't know. I feel like you're beating around the bush trying to say something without actually saying it. Which is good in poetry, but only when used in the right way so that it still makes sense.