Wow...

Well I thought that was very, very good. Normally I would state my favorite stanza, but it's too hard to pick one, so I'm just going to say they're all equally good. Although, I do think that the 12th stanza, about 'Big Papa Love' was the funniest by far. I loved the wording. The flow and rhymes were superb. Well done. Also, it's nice to see a good male writer. I don't know about anyone else, but I rarely see a a decent male writer, so thanks for that.

Brad

THAT WAS VERY CUTE...S0 U EVER GET Y0UR PRAYER ANSWERED BETCHA DiD...KEEP UP THE G0OD W0RK...WE'RE L0ViN iT!! = ]]

Excellent love poem, I've always thought that love poems were the best poems and you reminded me of that.

This is a great poem and I like your others too! I hope that you keep posting :)

Wow thats all ican say. thegirl who wthis is about is pretty lucky u could make some serious money writting poems awesome job that was such a heart felt poem.

Honestly I didnt like it. I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!
Why cant there be more guys like you.

Oh my goodness, this is best poem i ever read!! i truly love it!! super great poem!! 5/5 and 1,000%
-k

Thats such a sweet prayer. I wish that I could think up stuff like that.... :)

..wow, so nyc..speechless..!!=P

This is the most beautiful touching praying poem i had ever read i love it and hope your prayer would be fulled

I LIKED THIS POEM. VERY TOUCHING!

~LOVE~

Beautifully written, that was so sweet. 5/5

Good job!

Outstanding

.u should keep on writing

"A girl I can call my heavenly dove
who nicknames me Boyfriend and Big Papa Love"

Guh! lol, that had me rolling! But I have to agree with so many others, this poem, like all of yours, is just a 5 star piece! It flows so well and is easy to follow with such a sweet message. I love reading anything from you.

=]

Hope you never stop writing!
-Brit

Wow.. i absolutely love that.
its awesome :]

"Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray for a woman who'll love me deep"

That was a good way to start out. Very Cute.

"With sparkling eyes and silky hair
who knows my faults and doesn't care"

Everyone wishes for someone like that.

"who will watch my movies and put on a smile
who will take my word with out a trial"

no arguments. Perfect.

"the kind of girl who's wild but sweet
who's heart and mind can never be beat"

Well i want that but with a guy :)

"who knows what she wants and how to ask
no games, no lies, or truth covering masks"

you have an amazing talent for writing.

"who loves to have fun and isn't a tease
and a single red rose puts her mind at ease"

sometimes having a mate that teases is a good thing just not all the time lol

"who can look into my eyes and know that it's true
when I hold her tight and say I love you"

Awwwww.

"who can touch my face and know how I feel
who doesn't take bull and gives it to me real"

blunt person. just like my boyfiend.

"Who can stand up tall on her own two feet
but can still dance with me in the middle of the street"

that is so sweet. amazing.

"Who will cry on my shoulder when she is pain
But I can wash it all away with a kiss in the rain"

u r truly a great writer.

"who lets me watch sports and loves to watch too
who just wants me not expecting I do"

well if u said all that. wouldnt that be a perfect girl for you too marry?
A girl I can call my heavenly dove
who nicknames me Boyfriend and Big Papa Love"

This made me crack up. Cute.

"who knows that I'm hers and knows that she's mine
who loves to be silly and have a good time"

very cute.

"who holds her breath when I kiss her slow
who's graceful not flashy but her beauty still shows"

this is probably my favorite stanza. its perfect.

"Who thinks just living is the greatest thrill
And knows that I love her and always will"

:)

"Now I lay me down to sleep
I promise to love her and thats a promise I'll keep"

perfect end.

"If you grant my prayer I'll be the envy of men
Thank you my Lord, good night and Amen"

magnificent.

Adorable :) 5/5