I'm sick of everything you say and do

by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]   Sep 12, 2005


"I'm sorry if i hurt you
i won't do it again"
your full of lies, i hate you
your driving me insane

who do you think you are
your always hurting me!
just when i fall for you
you say we cannot be!!

i hate you so much
i wish this would go away
i wish i didn't care
about all the things you say

you hurt me more than ever
i wish it would all just go
god this is to bad for you
i can't believe you would be this low

saying one thing
and not doing what you say
well I'm done with this shit
i hope it ALL goes away

so goodbye my love
i wish you loved me too
but now I'm over it
I'm totally over you

i hope your happy
with making me cry
i hope your happy
when you told that lie

F u k who do you think u r
i think you no me well
so now you no that i get hurt
and that i have finally fell

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Well done for a starter poem hun. Repetative but it hit the right spot and well let's just say i can see a true evolution in your writing since. I dont know if you'll get this comment or see it but, this is a peom I'm sure many can relate to, I know I can, especially after my last relationship Lol. Guys, who needs them:P I hope to read more of your work but you know how it is between school and sleep theres very little time left to chill.

    once again well done,
    Jenn
    Ps: if you ever would want to edit and revamp this to point you in the right direction, some... more interging words would do wonders for the emotion in this =)

  • 19 years ago

    by xXlostXx

    Hey thats really gud
    i really like it :D
    keep up the good work
    5/5
    - xXlostXx

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