Hey thats really gud
i really like it :D
keep up the good work
5/5
- xXlostXx

Well done for a starter poem hun. Repetative but it hit the right spot and well let's just say i can see a true evolution in your writing since. I dont know if you'll get this comment or see it but, this is a peom I'm sure many can relate to, I know I can, especially after my last relationship Lol. Guys, who needs them:P I hope to read more of your work but you know how it is between school and sleep theres very little time left to chill.

once again well done,
Jenn
Ps: if you ever would want to edit and revamp this to point you in the right direction, some... more interging words would do wonders for the emotion in this =)