That's so sad...as intended i guess but just wow. All i want to do is offer my helping hand and help you through all this coz no one should be alone or feel like u do. Yes, you will find happiness, you're young, and have so much to live for. Please hold on so u can prove that...
take care xoxo

That's a really intense poem. It's filled with a lot of emotion. I love it though. It's great. I can relate to that. Take care.

Again I can relate to how you're feeling. I love the way you get across the longing for the knife, I hope it never comes to that though.

I can relate 2 d way ur feelin but there is allways anuva way out!!! u will pull thru!! hav faith in urself!!

Dats ok i will prob email u thanx 4 sayin dat me n d guy suit it meens more 2 me now that u will eva no!!!
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randomonosity

Oh! Awesome poem! I luv it! Alot of people cana relate I'm sure, I know I can! Keep writing!

Hey, thanks for your comment on mine. Don't worry though...
This was a really good poem, I don't really like suicide poems that often because you only get one chance at life - and I just don't agree with the thought of throwing it away. Though those thoughts to have an impact on people's emotion, and that's exactly what this poem had. I know that feeling, and I don't think anyone should feel it. Anyway, what I'm trying to say is you're really good at portraying pain. Nice job.