by BrokenMisery Sep 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Tears weep from those solemn eyes, |
by LadyPearl
Pretty good, Not as good as your other ones. Not really a fan of repetitive parts. Keep it up |
by Kurt
If that wasn't good enough for you i wouldn't mind having that knid of skill. It was wonderful. You really do a great job and i hope you keep writing because i always find myself to want to read more. ANyway it was a great job and keep writing!! |
by N J Thornton
Oh I see these are lyrics, yes? They should be interesting put to music. |