Wow that has really touched me...and i think it touched do many other ppl too. great way....the way you have expressed yourself...i can c that u care for thid country...5/5

Wow that was great brought a tear to my eye. i really liked it. its nice to know theres people out there that cares for this country. keep up the great work......huggs....missy

Nice poem my arents are also tryig to help the peple that are homeless

Wow...really good...you describe everything in just simple words...and we should do everything we can to help...I certainly agree...

Wow thats exelllent!! l love it! you managed to join all those words together so well! it was such a visual poem. well done

Ruby

The way you used those words together is just amazing... Such a short poem and still so powerful...
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Hey great poem..its so sad..but true...and a real great write too!
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Wow this is so beyond true its like scary , this poem is absolutely amazing lol i wish i could write this good

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Great poem, you should know the truth about the 9/11 attacks though, if you would iike i will give you about a page worth of info on it, its quiet suprising, not usually what you would think about