That made my mouth drop open..i especially love the ending

Wow. Yeah I agree with Clare the end bit is so powerful! This poems really great. I like your poems. Well the ones I've seen. Still looking...
Take Care, Elle xx

I agree but i dont think the ending is 2 strong though!
i love all the poems that r urse dat i hav read!
take care! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo