Cool poem, good rhymes.
Cheer up :)

Great poem, I'm not saying this mean, its contructive critisism, but im not so sure dream and sreamed rhyme, if u took of the "ed" it would and damaged and landed arent really rhymin words either. I shouldnt really be talkin cuz on my other account non of my poems rhyme lol. Other than that, great 5/5.